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December 31, 2012

We are missing a few electronic submissions, but will hopefully have them posted before the 19th.

You will critique submissions #1-47 and if you are missing a number, please check back for it later.

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Poem for Practice Critique

December 31, 2011

Lullaby
 
Lay your sleeping head, my love, 
Human on my faithless arm;
Time and fevers burn away
Individual beauty from
Thoughtful children, and the grave
Proves the child ephemeral:
But in my arms till break of day
Let the living creature lie,
Mortal, guilty, but to me
The entirely beautiful.

Soul and body have no bounds:
To lovers as they lie upon
Her tolerant enchanted slope
In their ordinary swoon,
Grave the vision Venus sends
Of supernatural sympathy,
Universal love and hope;
While an abstract insight wakes
Among the glaciers and the rocks
The hermit's carnal ecstasy.

Certainty, fidelity
On the stroke of midnight pass
Like vibrations of a bell
And fashionable madmen raise
Their pedantic boring cry:
Every farthing of the cost,
All the dreaded cards foretell,
Shall be paid, but from this night
Not a whisper, not a thought,
Not a kiss nor look be lost.

Beauty, midnight, vision dies:
Let the winds of dawn that blow
Softly round your dreaming head
Such a day of welcome show
Eye and knocking heart may bless,
Find our mortal world enough;
Noons of dryness find you fed
By the involuntary powers,
Nights of insult let you pass
Watched by...
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(47) Drunk

February 16, 2007

Drunk 
           
It was late Sunday afternoon when I went out to the park. The backyard of my house is the park, so this wasn’t very hard. Most of our neighbors have fences between their yards and the park, but my dad doesn’t want to do that. We don’t have a pool for drunk teenagers to stumble into, and with all the banana trees everywhere, it’s not so easy to tell that there isn’t a fence. I was wearing my old rollerblades. They have these purple plastic wheels that make for a bumpy ride, but they’re light so I can pretend to do jumps and sweet tricks like I see on TV.
            I started around the path, smiling at all the happy people. Everyone is happy in the park, don’t you know? Here are the pot-smoking college students wearing Birkenstocks, there is the young family, full of hope and brimming with the prospect of the life ahead. On second thought, the dad looks scared shitless.
            Techno is injected into my ears through my snazzy new tape player. I am a firm believer in the power of good techno music. It is the accurate heartbeat of society. I skate...
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(46) Life Imitating Art

February 15, 2007

Life Imitating Art

Beijing Talks stalled. Chinese fire drill? Or greatest threat to national security ever? You decide. Next on FOX News.

The audio from the television set harmonized with the laboring of the air-conditioning compressor to form a slow, dull vibration. Entropy was the order of the day- the inevitable decay of order into chaos. Distinct speech was unrecognizable. The righteous indignation of the intellectuals-for-hire was reduced to so much white noise, electronic detritus. Joseph Kessler saw the image on the screen, now distorted beyond all recognition, reflected at the bottom of what remained of a gin and tonic. As he sat there, Bogart-esque in his meditations, he could feel every nerve, every synapse even, synchronize with this vibration. He would have been in Nirvana, but for the blinding headache and deepening sense of existential angst.

“So, what do you want your last words to be?” His reverie ended with all the abruptness of a defibrillator-terminated near death experience. Having reentered the here-and-now, Kessler was greeted by Julia Kaczynski- long time acquaintance and source of sexual frustration. Her voice was tinged with the kind of affected, world-weary cynicism worthy of any film noire femme fatale.

“What...

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(45B) Too Lazy To Put a Title on this Sonnet

February 14, 2007

Too Lazy to Put a Title on this Sonnet
If fate goes as the seasons bloom
Rises and falls like the ship’s boon
Then sail away with me, and be my all
And we shall live forever, while stardust fall
If one day I stand at the top of the world
Then be my queen, and sit on thy throne
But if I were to become a beggar, too
Would you hold my hand, and live it through?
If the world fell into chaos and destruction
Would you stand with me, and rise from the ruin?
If you said yes to these things and more
Then a little winter might not seems so sore
And if you truly meant that you loved me
Then I truly give my heart to thee

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(45A) Untitled

February 14, 2007

Untitled

The sign glowed with a crimson flush, fluorescence against grey backdrop. Ponsetti’s Shoes, it read. Curvy letters that scripted and flowed unto the next, no logo or sign symbolic of recognition. Just two simple words. Yet two words that carried more meaning than any enterprising corporation. Ponsetti’s Life, maybe it should have read. Or Ponsetti’s Last Hope. A stranger in name and intent. A lone wolf in a pack of lions.
I saw him as I passed by his shop, as simple as the store name. Two tanned walls flank a set of chairs. Two tanned walls of little rubber-soled wrappings, unrecognizable in shape or form save in the mind of the old man kneeling before a child not more than four or five years of age in one of the chairs. His father towered above his legacy, and eagerly expected the old man to finish with his fitting. He pointed a finger at the shoe the child wore and waved it as if such material were not fit for such infant high fashion. The old man, paper ruler in hand, scooted closer to the child like a buffoon before his prince, and stared through his thick round glasses...
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(44) Doom

February 13, 2007

Doom

The final war ends with one last resound,

When stars and the earth together collide.

Soldiers without names lie dead on the ground

With naught but battle hot blades at their sides.

The King, now dethroned, will evil replace

With dissension marked by his scaled skin.

And in vengeance, death will the earth deface,

For forced existence as the spawn of sin.

If bards and fools left hold freedom of tongue

Their lyrics will be of the darkest sort

A worser tale than we from Eden flung

Mankind’s dreaded fate will be their report:

“The Kingdom of Heaven is split in twain,

Death and destruction are all that remain.”


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(43D) Jealousy

February 12, 2007

Jealousy

My hands they burn

with clenched-fist love

rivulets of bloodlust

slipping through my fingers

from moondrunk half-crescents,

like my precariously hoarded heart,

and my self-proscribed rationality

      -all lost in the haze

      of trauma-induced incapacitation.


Posted at: 02:16 PM | Permalink

(43C) Bound

February 12, 2007

Bound

Were you the leaping flame,

Winding insidiously into the essence, the weakness

The tinder heart

Every movement silhouetted, echoed, shaded

A delayed caress

The bright aching burning center of the fire

Deepening the Shadow: that wavering emptiness.

Be it the burning wick, or the pure funeral pyre,

Be it the forest fire or the desolation of a crumbling home

The spontaneously combusted lover

Burning up and burning down in fury, love

Or absence thereof:

Frustration ignited.

One step away, one behind

Shadows exist only in the wake of truer things

Epitomizing the burnt out hollow, the used thing

Essential and ignored

A shadow makes it real, grounding it,

The third dimension, self-sacrifice.

Twisting and curling

Smoke spiraling into existence

Jut as incidental

As

Me


Posted at: 02:15 PM | Permalink

(43B) Temple

February 12, 2007

Temple

Empty avenues stand before me

Their height s and depths all open-

Every step a measure in Grace.

“O how the mighty have fallen”

Who now are so declined.


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